Self-Reflection

When reviewing my writing I notice a common flaw - I have trouble bringing a writing to life. I believe I struggle with focusing on a single moment and having the reader visualize it. I need to work on not being so general and actually show the reader what i am trying to convey. I think my grammar is better and word choice is acceptable, but actually conveying a message to the reader is where I need work. In the future I plan to give the reader better descriptions and moments they can feel and understand my writings.